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Nothing but silence
A bird tells me his story
And flies away

The ocean currents
Even five miles away
Fill me with hope

Green sways in distance
A subtle movement of wood
Unseen footprints

ため息は
鳴かない口に
離された
©2009 ~ethantru
:iconethantru:

Author's Comments

We're studying Japanese poetry right now and our in-class assignment was to write a couple of traditional haiku. We got to sit outside and write them. It was very pleasant!

Hope you like them! :)

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:iconmoonshadowdance:
Pretty. I don't know if I'm wrong, but I always thought haiku were 5, 7, 5 but yours are 5, 7, 4. But either way, yours are so beautiful.

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i THINK i'M GOING INSANE
:iconethantru:
:lol: hahahah Yeah they are supposed to be 5-7-5, however, with the limitations of the English language vs. Japanese, a little slip is permitted... :D

and Thank you very much!! :hug:

How are ya' Gracie??
:iconmoonshadowdance:
You're welcome. I'm doing just fine. How's you?

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i THINK i'M GOING INSANE
:iconethantru:
I'ms good. Thanks! :) How's Twelfth Night going? It's playing this week, right?
:iconmoonshadowdance:
Twelfth Night- Thankfully it doesn't open till next week. We're dreadfully behind, but you of course know that we always manage to pull our shit together just in time.

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i THINK i'M GOING INSANE
:iconethantru:
Hahahaha :rofl: True 'dat! True 'dat!! :P

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